I. Introduction
A. At first glance victims of child abuse look like every day person, story behind thisB. Example through CDC
C. Thesis: People impacted by abuse often are not immediately recognized however, many experiences lifelong challenges related to a propensity for violence, low self-esteem and increased risk of substance abuse.
II. Propensity for violence
A. Victims of child abuse tend to have a tailored adulthood with actions from there experience1. Reasoning behind that
B. Evidence of a case in this situation
1. Example details and source
C. Transition statement
III. Low self esteem
1. A reasoning and example of a case where abuse has caused
self-esteem issues
2.
Evidence behind this issue
3. Transition statementIV. Risk of substance abuse
A. The risk of substance abuse is high in abuse victims1. Supporting example with reasoning
2. Evidence and statistics behind this
3. Transition statement
V. Counter Claim and arguments
A. Some people don’t believe that abuse can have long term affect and example
1.Reasoning why this is proven to not be the case
B. Only a small fraction of child abusers goes on to commit violence
1. I’m going to explain why this is misleading
CONCLUSION
A. Example with another point of evidence from CDC
B. Summarize victims risk of propensity for violence, low self-esteem and risk of substance abuse
I like your topic. No child deserves to be hurt, ever! There is no excuse for it. I think you did a good job with the structuring of your outline. I could not see anything that needed changed, but I am also no expert. Looks great.
ReplyDeleteNicely done, Shelbee. I think you pose some interesting thoughts on the counter-argument, of why people think that abuse has no lasting effect on a child. Seriously? That's insane! I look forward to seeing the evidence and research you're intending to present in your writing.
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